Comments on: 16: Power Struggle http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book01/16 High Fantasy - Higher Education Sun, 12 Feb 2012 18:03:58 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: AlexandraErin http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book01/16#comment-9568 AlexandraErin Mon, 04 Apr 2011 23:43:38 +0000 http://talesofmu.nfshost.com/story/?p=30#comment-9568 Thanks! I'm not jumping on fixing these right away because I'm going to be going through these chapters progressively, but it's useful to have the notes here.<p class="top-comments">Current score: <span class="top-comments-karma" id="karma-9568">1</span> <small>(to vote for this comment, please visit the site)</small></p> Thanks! I’m not jumping on fixing these right away because I’m going to be going through these chapters progressively, but it’s useful to have the notes here.

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]]> By: Brenda http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book01/16#comment-9567 Brenda Mon, 04 Apr 2011 22:55:18 +0000 http://talesofmu.nfshost.com/story/?p=30#comment-9567 Minor typo: "Puddy was so in my face that she was the only I could see" The only what?<p class="top-comments">Current score: <span class="top-comments-karma" id="karma-9567">0</span> <small>(to vote for this comment, please visit the site)</small></p> Minor typo: “Puddy was so in my face that she was the only I could see”

The only what?

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