Comments on: 3: Welcome Festival

By: pedestrian

pedestrian — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 05:17:48 +0000

I am also beginning to re-read this epic accomplishment. “The Most Just And Pious Brethren of the Blue-White Rose.” - Take the context out of any religion and all you are left with are the hypocrisy's.

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By: Desiree Lisenbee

Desiree Lisenbee — Thu, 14 Jul 2011 03:22:15 +0000

I really liked your writing but perhaps this time you may have been too sick when writing because your writing it feels rushed.

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By: Brenda

Brenda — Sun, 03 Apr 2011 05:48:11 +0000

Yes, it is.

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By: fastfinge

fastfinge — Fri, 11 Feb 2011 17:19:38 +0000

I'm rereading all the old chapters. Is it too late for typo reports? If not: "The one thought that had got me the through high school" has an extra the. Should be: "The one thought that had got me through high school " I think.

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By: Erm

Erm — Fri, 26 Nov 2010 21:35:48 +0000

I'm reading through the old chapters again, and trying to catch early references... > overly chipper half-elf of indeterminate gender Is that Steff?

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