Comments on: 418: Out Of Depths

By: pedestrian

pedestrian — Mon, 06 Feb 2012 00:23:00 +0000

“No, that’s actually just… Sunday morning,” I said. “Yeah, we’ll be fine,” I said, trying to force myself to be nonchalant. “Go on, have fun.” Okay, maybe I could stand being a little more chalant than that. “I mean, do what you have to.” “Oh, so that’s how you say ‘mind your own business’ in extraplanar fishese,” Ian said. “I’ve been wondering.” A.E., I just love your command of the English language. Ohh, by the way, I know I'm dating myself but it would be amusing to have a relative/character/investigator/smuggler? named Modesty Blaise

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By: Rawr

Rawr — Thu, 02 Feb 2012 18:50:08 +0000

"…or the’d discover that under her smooth, red-tinged skin, she was hiding something a lot scarier looking than any demon and forget about finding evidence of anything else." I believe it should be "... or they'd"

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By: Steffen

Steffen — Sat, 27 Nov 2010 01:21:38 +0000

"They’d at least check Iona out because I had a lawyer who would use it against them if they ignored a tip that could clear me, and they’d eithef find proof of her involvement or…" There is a typo there, "eithef". Just thought you'd like to know.

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