Comments on: 453: Big Trouble http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book0x/453 High Fantasy - Higher Education Sun, 12 Feb 2012 18:12:38 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: BMeph http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book0x/453#comment-13030 BMeph Wed, 25 May 2011 04:13:14 +0000 http://www.talesofmu.com/story/?p=4185#comment-13030 Yeah, I could so see Steff wearing a tight T-shirt saying, "Stop NOT staring at my tits" and a matching skirt with "Stop NOT staring at my ass" on it. Maybe someone should offer such apparel for sale... ;)<p class="top-comments">Current score: <span class="top-comments-karma" id="karma-13030">0</span> <small>(to vote for this comment, please visit the site)</small></p> Yeah, I could so see Steff wearing a tight T-shirt saying,
“Stop NOT staring at my tits”
and a matching skirt with
“Stop NOT staring at my ass”
on it.

Maybe someone should offer such apparel for sale… ;)

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]]> By: Mackenzie http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book0x/453#comment-7418 Mackenzie Wed, 16 Feb 2011 20:45:20 +0000 http://www.talesofmu.com/story/?p=4185#comment-7418 you never did the cross referencing. Just thought I'd remind you.<p class="top-comments">Current score: <span class="top-comments-karma" id="karma-7418">0</span> <small>(to vote for this comment, please visit the site)</small></p> you never did the cross referencing. Just thought I’d remind you.

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]]> By: Speight http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book0x/453#comment-2043 Speight Thu, 05 Aug 2010 10:31:34 +0000 http://www.talesofmu.com/story/?p=4185#comment-2043 "smooth thing over": I agree "thing" really should be plural and one more: "that there’s going to be announcement" is missing an "an" between "be" and "announcement"<p class="top-comments">Current score: <span class="top-comments-karma" id="karma-2043">0</span> <small>(to vote for this comment, please visit the site)</small></p> “smooth thing over”: I agree “thing” really should be plural

and one more:
“that there’s going to be announcement” is missing an “an” between “be” and “announcement”

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]]> By: 2nt9 http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book0x/453#comment-2003 2nt9 Mon, 02 Aug 2010 20:44:29 +0000 http://www.talesofmu.com/story/?p=4185#comment-2003 Im sorry but sometimes I cant help but laugh =D Oh, well, I guess you can be jealous. That, and it would explain your reaction to everyone I want to fuck.” (Hypocrisy el oh el) “You want to fuck everyone,” (If its got an orifice Im pretty sure a "Futa" would stick something in there xD.......epseically steph *shudder* )<p class="top-comments">Current score: <span class="top-comments-karma" id="karma-2003">0</span> <small>(to vote for this comment, please visit the site)</small></p> Im sorry but sometimes I cant help but laugh =D

Oh, well, I guess you can be jealous. That, and it would explain your reaction to everyone I want to fuck.”
(Hypocrisy el oh el)

“You want to fuck everyone,”
(If its got an orifice Im pretty sure a “Futa” would stick something in there xD…….epseically steph *shudder* )

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]]> By: Wysteria http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book0x/453#comment-1983 Wysteria Sat, 31 Jul 2010 21:33:22 +0000 http://www.talesofmu.com/story/?p=4185#comment-1983 I'm going to put in a vote for splitting the chapter. Bite sized pieces are nice.<p class="top-comments">Current score: <span class="top-comments-karma" id="karma-1983">0</span> <small>(to vote for this comment, please visit the site)</small></p> I’m going to put in a vote for splitting the chapter. Bite sized pieces are nice.

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]]> By: Brenda http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book0x/453#comment-1981 Brenda Sat, 31 Jul 2010 16:47:06 +0000 http://www.talesofmu.com/story/?p=4185#comment-1981 That is a problem - I had a hard time finding it, because there is no "Other Works" link on the ToMU page itself. There is on the other pages.<p class="top-comments">Current score: <span class="top-comments-karma" id="karma-1981">0</span> <small>(to vote for this comment, please visit the site)</small></p> That is a problem – I had a hard time finding it, because there is no “Other Works” link on the ToMU page itself. There is on the other pages.

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]]> By: Oitur http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book0x/453#comment-1976 Oitur Sat, 31 Jul 2010 07:51:48 +0000 http://www.talesofmu.com/story/?p=4185#comment-1976 AAauuuugggghhhhh!!!! Head & shoulders--no apostrophe!! I hate seeing that!<p class="top-comments">Current score: <span class="top-comments-karma" id="karma-1976">0</span> <small>(to vote for this comment, please visit the site)</small></p> AAauuuugggghhhhh!!!! Head & shoulders–no apostrophe!! I hate seeing that!

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]]> By: Oitur http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book0x/453#comment-1975 Oitur Sat, 31 Jul 2010 07:50:20 +0000 http://www.talesofmu.com/story/?p=4185#comment-1975 Love that Pala--she gets to my Scandinavian-American pride. I keep picturing this chapter as it might be filmed--with Pala's head & shoulder's outside the top of the frame.<p class="top-comments">Current score: <span class="top-comments-karma" id="karma-1975">0</span> <small>(to vote for this comment, please visit the site)</small></p> Love that Pala–she gets to my Scandinavian-American pride. I keep picturing this chapter as it might be filmed–with Pala’s head & shoulder’s outside the top of the frame.

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]]> By: Rin http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book0x/453#comment-1972 Rin Fri, 30 Jul 2010 17:44:01 +0000 http://www.talesofmu.com/story/?p=4185#comment-1972 Seeing Pala again sure is nice indeed; she is as Mack said herself an inherently sympathetic character. There is one other character I would kind of like to see even more though. I've been reading the story from chapter 1 again and it occurred to me that, while she was a fairly significant presence early on in the story, we haven't seen or heard from Celia in, what, 60 chapters? Something like that anyway. I'm really rather curious what she's been up to.<p class="top-comments">Current score: <span class="top-comments-karma" id="karma-1972">0</span> <small>(to vote for this comment, please visit the site)</small></p> Seeing Pala again sure is nice indeed; she is as Mack said herself an inherently sympathetic character. There is one other character I would kind of like to see even more though.

I’ve been reading the story from chapter 1 again and it occurred to me that, while she was a fairly significant presence early on in the story, we haven’t seen or heard from Celia in, what, 60 chapters? Something like that anyway. I’m really rather curious what she’s been up to.

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]]> By: Kaila http://www.talesofmu.com/story/book0x/453#comment-1966 Kaila Wed, 28 Jul 2010 06:20:18 +0000 http://www.talesofmu.com/story/?p=4185#comment-1966 I've been crook(ill) for the last few days, and Two made me smile. Thanks.<p class="top-comments">Current score: <span class="top-comments-karma" id="karma-1966">0</span> <small>(to vote for this comment, please visit the site)</small></p> I’ve been crook(ill) for the last few days, and Two made me smile.

Thanks.

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